Oamaru Creek

Walt: Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

A dirty, stinky, ugly river is what our river is. Did you know that our creek used to be full of people swimming, some of you might think im joking but it’s true now people just walk past it like it’s nothing. What do you think we should do to help our creek?

Marked by: Venetia

Task description: This is a introduction about the river talks. My task was to write a detailed introduction about the river talks with only using a simple sentence a complex sentence and a simple question.