WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
1. Introduction
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Orientates and hooks
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2. Body Paragraph 1
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About how excited I was to hear that I was going to the Zoo, It was really only a website, How the Website really sucked/ boring.
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3. Body Paragraph 2
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Learning about animals, What was disappointing about it.
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4. Body Paragraph 3
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Zoo websites can be fun sometimes but not always.
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5. Conclusion
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What I think about the San Diego Zoo
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We’re going on a trip to the Zoo. At Least that’s what I thought, A virtual Zoo really I don’t know if you would even call it a Zoo, Online animal sounds, online animal information Seriously! Wouldn't you wan't to go to the Zoo to see real life animals?
Introduction Rubric | ||||
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Hook | My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read. | My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience. | My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more. | When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more. |
Orientation | My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about. | My audience has some idea about what I am writing about. | My audience is clear what I am writing about. | My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing. |
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