WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
About how excited I was to hear that I was going to the Zoo, It was really only a website, How the Website really sucked/ boring.
3. Body Paragraph 2
Learning about animals, What was disappointing about it.
4. Body Paragraph 3
Zoo websites can be fun sometimes but not always.
What I think about the San Diego Zoo
We’re going on a trip to the Zoo. At Least that’s what I thought, A virtual Zoo really I don’t know if you would even call it a Zoo, Online animal sounds, online animal information Seriously! Wouldn't you wan't to go to the Zoo to see real life animals?
|Hook||My introduction is boring.|
It is difficult to read.
|My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.||My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.||When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.|
|Orientation||My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.||My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.||My audience is clear what I am writing about.||My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.|