A Trip To San Diego Zoo, NOT

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	About how excited I was to hear that I was going to the Zoo, It was really only a website, How the Website really sucked/ boring.
3. Body Paragraph 2	Learning about animals, What was disappointing about it.
4. Body Paragraph 3	Zoo websites can be fun sometimes but not always.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the San Diego Zoo

We’re going on a trip to the Zoo. At Least that’s what I thought,  A virtual Zoo really I don’t know if you would even call it a Zoo, Online animal sounds, online animal information Seriously! Wouldn't you wan't to go to the Zoo to see real life animals?

Introduction Rubric
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Hook	My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read.	My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.	My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.	When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation	My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.	My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.	My audience is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Fear Factor Challenge

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Seriously, How much more crazier can my teacher get. He's set us up with more than 5 other challenges now this the Fear Factor. Things just got weird. Even the title alone sent chills down my spine Mr Goodwin can’t get any worse. Can he?

1. Introduction	Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1	Introducing the Fear Factor Challenge. (News) Watching Video- What the Videos about. I knew Mr Goodwin wouldn't be that Cruel.
3. Body Paragraph 2	The contestants getting picked: Explaining: How they felt. What their Thoughts, feelings, looks where. How they feel vs how you feel.
4. Body Paragraph 3	Eating. Who won. No one spewed. Everyone found it easy. I knew was fake.
5. Conclusion	What I think about the fear factor challenge