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Tuesday 27 October 2015

Designing A NEW School Logo

If I was to completely change our school Logo at Pt England, this is what it would look like. 

Thursday 22 October 2015

A Trip To San Diego Zoo, NOT


WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.


1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
About how excited I was to hear that I was going to the Zoo, It was really only a website, How the Website really sucked/ boring.
3. Body Paragraph 2
Learning about animals, What was disappointing about it.
4. Body Paragraph 3
Zoo websites can be fun sometimes but not always.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo

We’re going on a trip to the Zoo. At Least that’s what I thought,  A virtual Zoo really I don’t know if you would even call it a Zoo, Online animal sounds, online animal information Seriously! Wouldn't you wan't to go to the Zoo to see real life animals?

Introduction Rubric
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HookMy introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
OrientationMy introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.My audience is clear what I am writing about.My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Friday 16 October 2015

Fear Factor Challenge

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Seriously, How much more crazier can my teacher get. He's set us up with more than 5 other challenges now this the Fear Factor. Things just got weird. Even the title alone sent chills down my spine Mr Goodwin can’t get any worse. Can he?


1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Introducing the Fear Factor Challenge. (News) Watching Video- What the Videos about. I knew Mr Goodwin wouldn't be that Cruel.
3. Body Paragraph 2
The contestants getting picked: Explaining: How they felt. What their Thoughts, feelings, looks where. How they feel vs how you feel.
4. Body Paragraph 3
Eating. Who won. No one spewed. Everyone found it easy. I knew was fake.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the fear factor challenge

Thursday 15 October 2015

The Pt England School Production, Cindy In da House

Reflection
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The Pt England School Production, Cindy in da house was AWESOME. Acting, dancing, singing this production just couldn't get any better. I thought that the story had been acted out absolutely superb and the dancers and everyone performed really well. I really enjoyed the singing "It's a hard knock life for ME" It was sung amazingly. 

The acting was done to perfection and I really felt like it was a Cinderella Story. I really enjoyed the Pt England School Production and I bet that all the parents and viewers loved it too. 

Review
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A famous fairy tale story told by Pt England School just like the original Cinderella Glass Slipper story, had been acted out, written again and changed around a bit to a G.I styles play. Where a girl called Cindy meets a handsome boy Josh, head boy and rugby captain. They both meet at the Prefects ball and like in the real story when the clock strikes, Cindy in a hurry rushes away leaving a Flower Sandal behind. 

This wonderful production, Cindy In da house, took place at Pt England School. I would rate the school production a 5 out of 5.