Thursday, 14 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

“Go” yelled dad he was yelling at the T.V while watching the boxing during, the Commonwealth Games. Dad was watching very intensely David Nyika looked strong Boom his opponent was knocked to the ground. Hooray we all shouted David won gold and he is a champion. Wow I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

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