Thursday, 23 April 2015

Immersion Assembly

WALT: Write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Have you ever seen you teacher dressed up as a superhero?  Today was the first day of Term 2, and we had whats called our immersion assembly. Our topic is Tinkering, tools & toys.  

Marked by: Patricia

Task Description:
Our task today was to write a introduction about our immersion assembly. We were only allowed to use a simple sentence, a complex sentence and a question. I think I got this score because of the way people were wanting to read more. Also the way my introduction lets the reader know what 

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